Ha Ha! that is a twist to your naughty story! The repeating verse gives the reader a sense of impatience wondering where you are going with this one, at least it did with me 😉
Haha, that seemed to be the intention – to build up the anticipation before dropping the bomb! Just tried that style and I’m happy of its outcome 🙂
Happy readers, happy me 🙂
Thanks Pranitha!
Haha, I’ll do my very best, Pranitha!
You see, poetry is not really my forte. Yet as they say, those that fall outside the realm of our God-given talents can be learned thru time and effort, haha!
Thanks for the encouragement though 😉
😂😂 That’s awesome, as I was reading I was thinking “this doesn’t look like something Andrei would write!” Then I got to the ending haha. Really creative!
Haha, right, that was something I really wouldn’t write 😅 but I did! I just added a little bit of twist at the ending, and that made the whole piece entirely different! 😉 sort of a ‘saving grace’ 😆
Thanks Jake for reading ☺
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A fun read with great rhythm. Thanks for sharing Andrei.
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Thank you for liking Ali 😄
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Ha Ha! that is a twist to your naughty story! The repeating verse gives the reader a sense of impatience wondering where you are going with this one, at least it did with me 😉
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Haha, that seemed to be the intention – to build up the anticipation before dropping the bomb! Just tried that style and I’m happy of its outcome 🙂
Happy readers, happy me 🙂
Thanks Pranitha!
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It most definitely worked! The picture to this poem is very misleading, I must say 😉 Will wait for more of these, Andrie!
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Haha, I’ll do my very best, Pranitha!
You see, poetry is not really my forte. Yet as they say, those that fall outside the realm of our God-given talents can be learned thru time and effort, haha!
Thanks for the encouragement though 😉
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Loved reading it.
Somehow I felt that you are going to bring a plot twist in the end and you sure did.
Still amazing work.
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Thank you Moushmi. Glad to hear you enjoyed reading it 😁
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Haha! That one is naughty! Love the ending! 😊
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Haha, effect of having too much sugar on my coffee I guess. But it is fun writing that. More fun reading your comments and reactions to it! Lol
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Yeah, I’m sure you got the reactions that you expected. 😊 nice one…you got us!
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Haha, just me taking a fun break from writing serious stuff 😉
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Oh la la!!! I couldn’t stop myself from reading! And the last line, lol! So! It wasn’t…. after all! 🙈🙉🙊
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Haha got you hooked ’til the end, didn’t I? 😉
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Yessss! Andrei! Yesssss! 🙂
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Haha
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Catchy…loved it! 🙂
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Thank you. Glad you do 😊
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Was not expecting the plot twist at all. Well played!
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Thanks Tiffany! 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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Haha… that’s given me a much-needed laugh this evening!
Good stuff. 😉
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Thanks Buffy! Happy to have made you laugh 😉
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😂😂 That’s awesome, as I was reading I was thinking “this doesn’t look like something Andrei would write!” Then I got to the ending haha. Really creative!
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Haha, right, that was something I really wouldn’t write 😅 but I did! I just added a little bit of twist at the ending, and that made the whole piece entirely different! 😉 sort of a ‘saving grace’ 😆
Thanks Jake for reading ☺
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Haha 😁 simply amazing one! I had gone into the wrong track 😉
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Hahaha, it’s just for fun 😁 Glad you found your way back, lol
Thanks, Radhika. You’ve read throughout the ***** ending, haha 😂
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